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Academic staff percentages in faculties by gender 2012

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Academic staff percentages in faculties by gender 2012

Grammar and spelling errors: Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter Suggestion: The …ducation and Medicine instead of males. the number of females worker is three times… ^^^ Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2] Message: Consider using a past participle here: ‘been’. Suggestion: been …han men staffs in Education. It is also be the case for arts, in which females are… ^^

Transition Words or Phrases used: also, first, if, nevertheless, so, in contrast, to begin with

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Performance on Part of Speech: To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words: No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted. Chars per words: 4.8908045977 4.92477711251 99% => OK Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK Word Length SD: 2.63357013139 2.65546596893 99% => OK Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted. Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.547539520022 98% => OK syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by: Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted. Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning. Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

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Performance on sentences: How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK Sentence length SD: 62.1398372624 43.030603864 144% => OK Chars per sentence: 106.375 112.824112599 94% => OK Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted. Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted. Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OKWhat are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion: Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121215493345 0.215688989381 56% => OK Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934122519277 0.103423049105 90% => OK Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18328280009 0.0843802449381 217% => The coherence between sentences is low. Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138540846685 0.15604864568 89% => OK Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163915794293 0.0819641961636 200% => OK

Essay readability: automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low. flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted. linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OKWhat are above readability scores?

-Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9 -Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

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